Use the The Writing Practice to turn criticism into a living document for improvement. To Anyone Who's Been Slammed by a Writing Teacher
Good writing answers the reader's questions before they ask them. Adopt a "skeptical" lens toward your own work to ensure every point is robust.
Avoid a "cookbook" style (e.g., "He did A. Then B happened.") by weaving in the character’s thoughts and feelings during the action.
Aim for "Shazam" in your writing by being lean and impactful. This avoids reader fatigue and ensures your point is understood quickly. 2. Describing Physical Action
Use the action of slamming to convey emotion without explicit dialogue. A character slamming a door behind them can replace an unnecessary "he said angrily".
